As I read Amy's draft 2 so far everything seemed like it was coming along. When I was reading her paper I thought it was already good enough to post with a few minor grammatical errors. It gave me the push to start working really hard on mine. She has her paper almost all done, and I only have like half of mine done. I liked reading about the sleep disorders she mentioned. I remember she had sleep apnea and insomnia. I don't remember the other one she is going to talk about, but when the entire paper is done and revised, I'm looking forward to reading it.
As I was looking over my review, Amy gave me a good review. However, I wish she would have been very critical. I know I did not to that to hers. But i feel weird criticizing someone's work, that they tried hard to do good on. Plus i didn't really find anything wrong with hers. But I know I have to go over my paper, and start making everything flow and come together. I am working on that.
I had my conference with jela. I am to general with my research paper. I need to get more into detail and tell everyone what i am going through step by step. I need to have intext citations. And i was told that the endorphins part was just placed their and to in a way get rid of it.
As I was looking over my review, Amy gave me a good review. However, I wish she would have been very critical. I know I did not to that to hers. But i feel weird criticizing someone's work, that they tried hard to do good on. Plus i didn't really find anything wrong with hers. But I know I have to go over my paper, and start making everything flow and come together. I am working on that.
I had my conference with jela. I am to general with my research paper. I need to get more into detail and tell everyone what i am going through step by step. I need to have intext citations. And i was told that the endorphins part was just placed their and to in a way get rid of it.
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